JC Brul Poet Pleiades

Port- a Pleiades

prussian sea from afar~
pearly shore in slumber
placidly anchored ships
pacific moon smiling
patiently waiting dawn
promise of your come back
painted in the starlight 

12 April 2021


For “ Pleiades - P Poetry Contest”
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
2nd place

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Sara Kendrick April 13, 2021 at 11:17 PM Enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 13, 2021 at 10:30 AM Congratulations on your win. What a magnificent picture with few words! BW ~ Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2021 at 2:49 AM - Congratulations ... much told in this little poem ... well done, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kathleen Austin April 12, 2021 at 2:42 PM I echo Andrea's sentiments entirely. You've painted so vivid a picture. Nice!

Kim Merryman April 12, 2021 at 1:45 PM JCB, your painted a delightful picture with your Pleiades! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2021 at 1:19 PM I just love the imagery you used in yours. Not that easy to do in this form . Congrats on the win.

Paulette Calasibetta April 12, 2021 at 7:58 AM Your poem, an inspiration for the world of poetry. Your vivid imagery tells a story; others would take chapters to express. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Take Care, Paulette