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entered in Brian Strand's Early Summer Standard Contest on June 2, 2017
PLACED 2nd

On porches bathed in brilliant sun enduring friendships are begun as neighbors air their hurts and joys and children learn to share their toys. On moonlit porches, arm in arm, sweethearts display romantic charm. The night was made for them, it seems. Love fills the air and starlight gleams. On crowded porches, trips are planned by those who dream of surf and sand or snow-capped mountains far away. They'll have their respite, come what may. On countless porches, you will find retirees resting weary minds. They've other things than work to tend; they're waiting for their second wind. Old porches now in disrepair attached to homes bereft and bare still echo with the lives of those who have gone on to sweet repose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/4/2017 8:32:00 PM
I love this Janice. Lucky for me, I do have a house with a big front porch. We can sit and view the mountains ...... and yes...memories are made on that porch. I hope someday, others will hear the echo of our voices and know we were there:) Lovely poem!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/4/2017 9:05:00 PM
I LOVE your comment. Thank you, Carrie! Janice
Date: 7/23/2016 7:33:00 PM
Hi Janice, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a wonderful poem Janice. It is so easy to see each picture you paint with your words. One can virtualy step into each picture for it seems so real. This is a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/23/2016 9:42:00 PM
Mike, your wonderful, uplifting comment has made my night. Thank you so much! Janice
Date: 7/23/2016 5:20:00 PM
This is marvelous. The kind of poem one can be proud to say they wrote!! Congrats for your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/23/2016 6:01:00 PM
How kind and encouraging you are, Andrea! Thank you so much! Janice
Date: 7/23/2016 1:20:00 PM
Janice, nice win... Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/23/2016 6:15:00 PM
And THANK YOU for sponsoring the contest! Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/23/2016 6:02:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 7/16/2016 9:22:00 AM
Very beautiful lay written. I could imagine the the various activities on the porch like film reel. Fantastic imagery, Janice. ~karam~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2016 11:24:00 AM
Thank you for this wonderful comment, Karam! Janice

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