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Porcelain Doll

Shy smile on your lips,
Eeriness wrapped your orbs. Please,
Vanish from my dreams.

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Beata Agustin

December 26, 2024 at 7:55 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Moon Flower

September 27, 2016 at 3:49 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Rae. :)

Skat A

September 19, 2016 at 9:40 PM

Rae Vee, Georgie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Manmath Dalei

September 18, 2016 at 2:33 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love

Poet Destroyer A

September 17, 2016 at 11:45 PM

Rae Vee,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Cyndi Macmillan

September 17, 2016 at 4:17 PM

Yes, those dolls can be very creepy! I did research and did you know that some dolls are made with real human hair? Welcome to Soup. The site can help people grow in their knowledge of forms. It can also just be a cool place to share poetry, just for fun. The site has the ability to be what you want it to be. Welcome to the Soup!

Rae Vee

September 17, 2016 at 8:34 PM

Thanks for the warm welcome! I appreciate it :)

Rae Vee

September 17, 2016 at 8:19 PM

Thanks for the warm welcome! I appreciate it :)