David Hyatt-Bickle Poet Rhyme

Por-Bazhyn's Sward

Church and fortress of clay that shone bright with might
Monastery of the faith of light
Though brief like a small spark stored 
Earth quaked and flames roared 
Dragons stared 
Sward 
Angels cared 
An island ignored 
Eternal with heaven’s lord 
As the radiant white moon at night 
Church and fortress of clay that shone bright with might 

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Date: January 20th 2023 center
Contest: Writing Challenge - Andaree Form - Poetry Contest center
Contest Sponsor: Constance La France center

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Sara Kendrick February 5, 2023 at 11:56 PM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France February 4, 2023 at 7:22 AM David, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, Constance