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Popsicle Plop

When I tried to lick an icy pop,
When bike riding, with two-up on top.
I screamed and you squealed
As ice cream, revealed
Two riders fly head over heels plop
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Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
Merryman Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:31 PM
That's why you should never eat and drive or ride etc. Ha! Ha! Congrats on your win, John! Blessings, Kim M
Anderson Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:44 PM
Thanks very much for your comment. All the best.
Kitchin Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 4:48 PM
John, congratulations on your winning placement, I enjoyed your creative limerick!
Anderson Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 5:27 PM
Thanks a lot Cheers
Fisher Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 5:32 PM
Funny limerick...easy to picture it.
Anderson Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 6:18 PM
thanks, cheers. It was a play on the game of two-up but probably no one gets it. Any thanks for coming in by, Cheers,
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