Popping-Glad Roses

Popping-glad roses,
  lipstick red,
watered in crystal vase,
small as the ledge
of a pond.
                  pondering
those blossoms, yet to be lit,
with their potential flames.

ruffled scent of glory
   in their short-lived story.

three will croon, late-bloomers -
   still cocooned.

bronze deer nods his head
in amen-annunciation -

the hourglass upends the pond
in existential happiness.

Nov 2022
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 10:53 PM
"popping glad roses" sound marvelous, are they a gladiola or a rose? Or a bit of both?
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Just a phrase that my muse provided. Originally popping-gay but changed it to glad.
George Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 5:55 PM
"ruffled scent of glory in their short-lived story." Beautiful image of red roses in a glass vase! Though their life is short, how they delight others with their enchanting scent and beauty ! Enjoyed your poem, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 10:39 PM
Well done Great imagery.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 4:58 AM
Thank you so much! :)
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