Popcorn Words

Words string together like popcorn garlands
with occasional cranberries for punctuation
Draped with care for spacing and flow
adding that something extra to your creation

There your words hang where all can admire
in awe and take in the imagery
Yet eventually the backdrop dries and
yellows, crumbles away in misery

Words escape, some forgotten
Taken down and tossed out like tinsel and dead tree
But in our minds words are bursting forth like popcorn
kernels , splitting our thoughts at the seed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 4:06 PM
Great write, Paula...reminds me of my "Ms. Deseree Flake"!! Go read it and have a laugh...Peace, love, Audrey P.S. see you at the Pub?
Culverhouse Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:52 AM
I like the popcorn phrase, keep stringing them up. well written.
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Paula. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:27 PM
Keep popping the words together, Paula. This is a delightful view of the writing process. Well done! Love, Carolyn
Goff Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 8:49 PM
a melancholy, with a hint of hope! and a bit o' festoonin' goin' on!!!! very original creative metaphors! Paula! again, BRAVO!!! jamesy
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