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Popcorn On a Tree

Flying shooting booming
Zooming, splitting, and flashing
Popcorn on a tree.

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Skat A

May 23, 2015 at 11:05 AM

MAYBE YOU REMOVED MOST OF YOUR HAIKU. I DON'T SEE MANY ON YOUR POEM LIST. SKAT

Robin Davis

January 14, 2014 at 4:58 PM

Dr. Ram This is a short but very alive poem. I could see the kernels of corn popping off the branches and flying everywhere. Nice job thanks for the nice comment and congrats on my Movie Reality poem.

Doris Culverhouse

July 3, 2010 at 8:03 PM

enjoyed reading sounds like fireworks to me. It does look like popcorn in one of the theater poppers falling from the sky. I love to go to stone mountain for the lazer show and fireworks for the fourth. they have the best show.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 3, 2010 at 11:46 AM

Luv this Haiku for the contest.. a perfect scene for fireworks ... popcorn on a tree..how inventive Dr. Ram.. good luck from the "Sweetheart"

Marie Harrison

July 3, 2010 at 6:17 AM

What a fantastic poem!

Marycile Beer

July 3, 2010 at 5:42 AM

Another 4th of July. This is real cute. God Bless, Cile

James Peranteau

July 3, 2010 at 4:41 AM

May the fourth be with you ! *smiles* james

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2010 at 12:45 AM

Well, it has great sound effects!! What inspired this one, Dr.Ram. Oh, and thanks again for the awesome win. LUv,Andrea

Grace Eunsong Lee

July 2, 2010 at 11:04 PM

You certainly caught the excitement! Thanks for the HM for my villanelle and good luck in the contest :) -Grace

Gerard Keogh Jr.

July 2, 2010 at 5:38 PM

Dr. Ram, You sure have come up with resplendent imagery for the contest. They used to light up Christmas tress with candles, but this goes them one better. Nicely done and good luck. Thanks, Gerard.

Timothy Brumley

July 2, 2010 at 9:20 AM

Excellent imagery Dr. Ram! I find it fascinating that for so many years I only composed the long rhyming poem, until I came to the soup. Now, I seem just as satisfied with the short poem. Thank you guys for that! Thank you also for all your comments, I do appreciate every one. And I apologize for not being as loyal with the little PC time I have at the moment. There is a popcorn tree from Japan that bares white puffy-hard seeds through the winter and this poem so reminded me of that time.