Pop My Collar Like Lafonze!

This bipolarness is killing me man
one moment I'm happy the nxet I'm sad
don't get us talkin bout the good book
scriptures you think you undersand, the ones
we mis-understood.
I thought the voices were devine dude
probaly one of you screwing around
with my head.

Pop my collar like Lafonze!

was pointing everyone out but all
the right people
come to find out the bad guys were
the ones who so quiet
can't work together or have unity
inless it against one of their own
They walk around all day taunting me 
with middle fingers
I could be crazy.. like the voice who told
Eli to go west
Like the voice who told Jeremiah about
the destruction
Like the voice who told Danial to prophecy
All the instruments of illusion including a few
sighting of my own?
Coming together for a doubtful future
the same Christ spoke about with his deciples.
Toward evil I just

Pop my collar like Lafonze!

I'm cool about man
cool like a fan
I got angels on my side
about the amount of sand
Yall aint doing nothing
making fools out ya selves
and for nothing

its cool

Pop My Collar Like Lafonze!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/2/2010 9:30:00 AM
they call bipolar disorder a brilliant madness at times! A brilliant and revealing poem steeped with deep and honest thoughts. Acutely creative! Love, Susan
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Date: 9/1/2010 11:54:00 AM
I like the way u rock these thrillers. Peace!
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:56:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, Rich
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Date: 8/28/2010 9:39:00 PM
Diamond Rich this is a brilliant piece ...the breaks in the line swith LaFonze are great... luv your last stanza ... cool piece on this happy weekend.. luv..
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