Pop, Crackle and Snap

Pop, crackle and snap Pop goes the popcorn Crackle goes the fire Snap goes the mercury ~ Winter's gunfire

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 11/28/2021 2:18:00 PM

Brr.... chilly This poem is cozy Gershon. Fun to read!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/11/2021 12:14:00 PM

I can picture these sounds; winter is coming!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/12/2021 10:47:00 AM

Home is where the hearth is: Crackle, Snap, and Pops

P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/5/2021 8:21:00 AM

More and more often this is what it sounds like when I stand up ;) Nice cozy winter image :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/5/2021 10:26:00 AM

Should I laugh or cry? Maybe 'tears of joy' or some such... As for me, a little oil on the joints a.m. and p.m., a lube job every 4 months, and I still squeak. lol. ~ Greasy Wheel

Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/5/2021 5:11:00 AM

Hello Gershon - Always is it amazing that the most brief entries have such impact and thought. Your entry before us proves that fact. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Enjoy the day and poetrysoup.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/5/2021 5:17:00 AM

I am for converting 'Ars brevis' ('Art is short/brief,' old Latin saying -- Ars brevis, Vita longa...life is long) into 'Ars longa.' What say you, Lisa? Thank you so much for the encouragement, and have a Wonderful Friday, Gershon

Deb M

Date: 11/5/2021 2:04:00 AM

That is very clever Gershon…. I really like it. Debx