Poor Stay Behind

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I stomp in a tie. Disdain for the poor to see. The rich elites flee.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/11/2021 10:12:00 AM

Marvellous senryu.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/11/2021 12:43:00 PM

Thanks, Victor, my very best regards

Eve Roper

Date: 4/10/2021 8:47:00 PM

Well said, Lasaad. hugs eve

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/11/2021 12:42:00 PM

Thanks, Eve, warm hugs.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/10/2021 4:51:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, You've penned a well-written piece about the rich and the poor. Good cartoon as well. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/10/2021 4:59:00 PM

I’m glad you like it, this one was penned seriously lol:) :) Have a great night Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2021 12:47:00 PM

- Great written ... love the cartoon ... life described perfectly, Las :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/10/2021 12:58:00 PM

I’m glad you like this, and I appreciate you reading and commenting ..//Anne-Lise, Have a blessed day with my deep regards and hugs to you. // Las