Poor Pitiful Me

Stumblin' through the haze
In a dumfounded daze
In a muddled malaise
Like a mouse in a maze

Broke and blase
Stuck in my ways
My libido won't blaze
My mojo betrays

Got a glaze in my gaze
Got nuthin' to praise
Hope it's only a phase
Or just one of those days...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 1:11 PM
We've all had " one of these days". Look on the bright side; a great write came out of your "haze". Lay
Devonshire Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 11:41 AM
These days you describe sound much like mine, Tim. Very touching poem. It was really nice to hear from you. Tried to call, but had the wrong number. Perhaps you are back in Louisianna now. Take care and let me know how you are. I've been sick and haven't been online very often. Feel like a Key West charter-fishing trip (three days)? Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 6:15 AM
Somehow with all the things not going your way you manage to make me chuckle and I sincerely hope it is just one of those days :) enjoyed this :) Wilma
Richards Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 7:33 PM
Just like me without my coffee in the morning!!! HHHaaa!! What a cute, (if pitiful) poem!!! It is nice to see you back, Tim!! Yes...I remember some great chats about music, and Sci-fi flicks....seen any good ones lately??? So glad to see you posting again, hope you are back to stay! :)
Culverhouse Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 6:46 PM
enjoyed.....have a praise for you to praise....My nieces got adopted today after 3 years!! hallelujah!!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Excellent write. Very simple yet says so much. Your title caught my attention. It's a great song by Warren Devon. Keep writing. Blessings, Rhonda
Amadore Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:02 PM
An adept exercise...nice read.
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