Poor Ole Paddy

poor ole paddy has the big head
because of twelve thirty one he said
had too many drinks
passed out he thinks
glad he woke up not dead
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Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 9:00 AM
I recognize a lot of Irish here, Timothy. LOL
Mcguire Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 10:32 PM
In my younger days... yikes!
Laurie Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 8:36 PM
Hello Timothy … like Paddy, once upon a time I'd have too many drinks, but thought I woke up in hell - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:26 PM
Been there done that ... in my younger days!
Mchattie Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 7:24 PM
Every day is one more day of your life until it's not. May Patty live long and prosper. Have a great day.
Mcguire Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 9:24 PM
Thanks David
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