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Poor jack

There once was a dumb builder named jack who put bricks on a sink in a stack didn’t do what he aught ta Now the floors full of water A mistake that then got him the sack

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Date: 6/3/2025 3:29:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/5/2024 10:19:00 AM
Lol, and rightly so, he needs to be struck off. Tom
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Linda Bolt
Date: 11/5/2024 12:14:00 PM
lol he does indeed

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