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Pools Edge

Warm hands slip and slide, deliriously succinct in the August heat. Hair’s humid and unkempt. We head for the pool’s edge and together we jump in, our laughter bubbles to the surface. Our buoyant suits rise and salute the sunrise. Skin to skin collection of vibrant rays and youth. Fluffy-white clouds make for a perfect day. The sunstorm with its powerful rainbow hues color our minds for a rainy day, when less than romance cradles us and we start to forget - oh no…we will remember and revive our love. warm hands slip’n slide perfect humidity & humility standing on edge we leap in wonder in the coolness in laughter we find each other’s smiles we kiss we remember we climb the ladder of love 8/ 3/ 22

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Date: 8/7/2022 10:34:00 PM
Incredibly romantic! I had to run up to see what you had listed as typed and I smiled. I have never used this category, did not realize it existed. Perfecto!
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Date: 8/7/2022 11:11:00 AM
Lovely... well done... Ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2022 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 8/5/2022 4:19:00 PM
Such fun romantic adventures to share. I enjoyed your love poem my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2022 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 8/4/2022 2:24:00 PM
ah, so sweet and tender, those wonderful tendril of memories that live on, this brings a smile to my lips Kim, thank you for sharing, have a great evening
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2022 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Rose! Blessings!
Date: 8/4/2022 7:16:00 AM
Wow, this is great Kim! I enjoyed this fun poem :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2022 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 8/4/2022 1:45:00 AM
How glad I am to see you having fun. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2022 6:23:00 AM
Thanks! Wishing you the best, my friend!
Date: 8/3/2022 3:49:00 PM
Sweet and romantic. Beautiful penning! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2022 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 8/3/2022 12:19:00 PM
Hi Kim! Really enjoyed the poem! It is funny that I posted one about my teenage experience in summer a little while ago!! Love your imagery and description really good one …Kim .. thanks.. Panagiota XXX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2022 1:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Pangie! xx

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