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Hi Poo Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Lawless 09/27/23

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Pooh Dunny It - a Bowel Shatt-Ering Senryu

loo paper and turd
remain in the toilet bowl ~
who forgot to flush?

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Andrea Dietrich

October 31, 2023 at 7:28 PM

yukky POO. Congrats, Jan.

Paul Callus

October 30, 2023 at 3:33 PM

I'm definitely not getting the blame for that, Jan!! :) But you can blame me for laughing about it :) :) Hugs // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

October 30, 2023 at 3:18 PM

hmm that happens every now and then, when they flush I whisper Amen ! congrats on your win dear Jan, your always the Queen of comedy here,

Charles Messina

October 30, 2023 at 3:00 PM

LOL Love your sense of humor, Jan. Many congrats on your win! Hugs xx

Linda Alice Fowler

October 30, 2023 at 1:54 PM

Funny one Jan! Congratulations! :)

Terry Miller

October 30, 2023 at 9:05 AM

Very funny; congratulations

Karen Croft

October 2, 2023 at 6:10 PM

Very funny!

Jan Allison

October 30, 2023 at 8:02 AM

thanks karen xx

Tania Kitchin

September 30, 2023 at 7:35 PM

Jan, a sight I hate to see in public restrooms, hugs.

Jan Allison

October 1, 2023 at 3:58 AM

I went into one last week - you wouldnt even want to rest your tush on it, it hadn't been flushed at all. i cant understand why folk cant even press a simple button to remove their deposit! hugs jan xx

David Fisher

September 30, 2023 at 12:50 PM

Good one! Blame the plumber.

Jan Allison

October 1, 2023 at 3:56 AM

more like the bummer lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

September 29, 2023 at 2:45 AM

You touched a sore point. I had to mend my flushing lately but I used a pail with water. No nasty smell for me. Hugs.

Jan Allison

September 30, 2023 at 2:08 AM

Ekk glad you got it sorted Victor:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

September 27, 2023 at 8:51 PM

Poo-r memory...

Jan Allison

September 28, 2023 at 6:34 AM

thanks Jo:-) you made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jerry Brotherton

September 27, 2023 at 5:58 PM

I had a brother-in-law live with us once. He had UC. The toilet bowl looked like it had been hit with a poo shotgun blast.

Jan Allison

September 28, 2023 at 6:34 AM

yuck! I guess the poor guy couldnt help it, but a bog brush by the side of the loo could prove a clue with what to do hugs Jan xx

Deb M

September 27, 2023 at 2:40 PM

Gross but clever…P.Q strikes again!! I think you must have pure poop running through your veins Jan! Haha!!! keep plopping oops plodding away my friend!! Debx

Jan Allison

September 27, 2023 at 3:59 PM

lol thanks Deb:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

September 27, 2023 at 1:57 PM

uggg, I hate seeing that crap. hahaha

Jan Allison

September 27, 2023 at 3:58 PM

me too Andrea especially when there is a loo brush lol:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau

September 27, 2023 at 12:27 PM

i've enjoyed your jocular senryu dear poet, i'll not fartget it ;) much love, james

Jan Allison

September 27, 2023 at 3:57 PM

thanks James x

Jeff Connelly

September 27, 2023 at 11:33 AM

Ewww Jan... potty poetry, butt funny at that ;-)

Jeff Connelly

September 27, 2023 at 4:14 PM

Why? I enjoy reading what you write, Jan. Don't let others bother you. Continue doing what you do...

Jan Allison

September 27, 2023 at 3:57 PM

not sure i even want to stay on the site atm but thats another story:-(

Jeff Connelly

September 27, 2023 at 1:07 PM

A crown I hope you hold forever Jan

Jan Allison

September 27, 2023 at 11:52 AM

Despite what some folk think I am Queen of poop/ Limericks on Poetry soup I will not relinquish my diamante crown until I am no longer able to flush a poem out lol:-) hugs Jan xx