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Saigon bombed Now – sigh – gone

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Mike Gentile

Date: 6/25/2022 6:39:00 AM

Though I echo others, a compliment nonetheless! You are indeed very clever! Happy Saturday!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2022 8:20:00 PM

With my pen as the lever, I can be clever... at times, anyway. Thanks, Mike. Best to you! :) gw

Terry Flood

Date: 6/24/2022 2:50:00 AM

I wonder what the shortest poem ever written is… I bet this would come close. Clever and (with apologies to the people of Saigon) really witty. Terry

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2022 8:20:00 PM

Another shortie: 'How odd of God // to choose the Jews' by Ogden Nash. Smiles, gw

Michael Tor

Date: 6/23/2022 10:37:00 PM

Love this play on words Gershon, ha ha!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2022 8:19:00 PM

Thanks for 'playing along,' Michael. Appreciate your support. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/23/2022 4:27:00 PM

so clever, gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2022 6:16:00 PM

I'm a 4-leaf clever... lol

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/23/2022 7:44:00 AM

Oh wow!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/23/2022 2:27:00 AM

Oh, ouch and in a mere three words. Congrats.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2022 12:22:00 PM

Poof positive! - as they don't say. lol.