Poof

Saigon bombed
  
  Now – sigh – gone

citylostword playlight verse

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Mike Gentile

June 25, 2022 at 6:39 AM

Though I echo others, a compliment nonetheless! You are indeed very clever! Happy Saturday!!

Gershon Wolf

June 25, 2022 at 8:20 PM

With my pen as the lever, I can be clever... at times, anyway. Thanks, Mike. Best to you! :) gw

Terry Flood

June 24, 2022 at 2:50 AM

I wonder what the shortest poem ever written is… I bet this would come close. Clever and (with apologies to the people of Saigon) really witty. Terry

Gershon Wolf

June 25, 2022 at 8:20 PM

Another shortie: 'How odd of God // to choose the Jews' by Ogden Nash. Smiles, gw

Michael Tor

June 23, 2022 at 10:37 PM

Love this play on words Gershon, ha ha!

Gershon Wolf

June 25, 2022 at 8:19 PM

Thanks for 'playing along,' Michael. Appreciate your support. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Ilene Bauer

June 23, 2022 at 4:27 PM

so clever, gershon!

Gershon Wolf

June 23, 2022 at 6:16 PM

I'm a 4-leaf clever... lol

Kim Rodrigues

June 23, 2022 at 7:44 AM

Oh wow!

Caren Krutsinger

June 23, 2022 at 2:27 AM

Oh, ouch and in a mere three words. Congrats.

Gershon Wolf

June 23, 2022 at 12:22 PM

Poof positive! - as they don't say. lol.

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