Poo Did It

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Poetic Form: Senryu

Inspired: 2023 September 27

*1st Place*
A HI-POO SENRYU
Contest Judged: 2023 October 30
Sponsored by: John Lawless

Image: Happy PBJ Day by The Old Reader

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

lunch not made by mom grannies quick-fix needed tums~~ poo berries unjam

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2023 1:33:00 PM

Congrats, my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/31/2023 1:37:00 PM

A PBJ Mahalo, William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/30/2023 1:21:00 PM

LOL dear William. You've really come undone in this one. Congratulations! :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/30/2023 2:25:00 PM

I don't recall my PBJs, Linda, 2nd time around, and lunch periods, me being an eat & play kid, the aftereffects at any time, nope--drawing blanks. Prolly<--kids text me) true, but your sentiments are crystal blue that doth persuade, my friend! Aloha, William

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 10/30/2023 9:04:00 AM

Just oooh! Liken a diaper moment, well congratulations on your win LoL

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/30/2023 10:41:00 AM

Aloha, James! A peanut butter un-jam tummy by Tums! Thanks for the thought-filled expression, my friend! Mahalo, William

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2023 7:55:00 AM

eww lol:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/30/2023 8:19:00 AM

Aloha, Jan! I'm unsure if the wordplay on peanut butter and jam panned out. Thanks kindly for your share and visit, my friend! Mahalo, William