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Poetic Form: Senryu

Inspired: 2023 September 27

*1st Place*
A HI-POO SENRYU
Contest Judged: 2023 October 30
Sponsored by: John Lawless

Image: Happy PBJ Day by The Old Reader

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Poo Did It

lunch not made by mom
grannies quick-fix needed tums~~
poo berries unjam

anxietybluefoodgrandmotherkidsenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

October 31, 2023 at 1:33 PM

Congrats, my friend.

William Kelii Kekaula

October 31, 2023 at 1:37 PM

A PBJ Mahalo, William

Linda Alice Fowler

October 30, 2023 at 1:21 PM

LOL dear William. You've really come undone in this one. Congratulations! :)

William Kelii Kekaula

October 30, 2023 at 2:25 PM

I don't recall my PBJs, Linda, 2nd time around, and lunch periods, me being an eat & play kid, the aftereffects at any time, nope--drawing blanks. Prolly<--kids text me) true, but your sentiments are crystal blue that doth persuade, my friend! Aloha, William