Pondering the Pavement

I ponder the pavement way more these days
as I walk past crowds of angry faces
their glaring, daring, provocative gaze.
I look down and check my own shoelaces
as I approach, much safer than to chance
an eye contact with some angry tirade.
Easier to give the pavement a glance
as do we all, an urban masquerade.
As much as I enjoy chewing gum spats,
trashed burger wraps, old butts from cigarettes,
needles, black bags of trash with writhing rats;
some things about the past I have regrets.
Trading smiles with cheerful passing strangers
while strolling down the street with head held high,
cold soda pop, Smokey Bear, Park Rangers,
USA, the flag, mom and apple pie …
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Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 8:50 PM
Love the tone of this one, Terry. And utterly true, too. ~ gw
Miller Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 2:32 AM
Thank you Gershon appreciate it my friend
La France Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 3:20 PM
Terry, excellent writing, I love this poem, best of luck in the contest, Constance
Miller Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 2:33 AM
Thank you so much Constance
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 2:10 PM
Concrete is the better choice to ponder, gathering what life encounters along the way; thusly, we must move forward, lest we stumble on such, yet with an abstinent smile: Aloha, my friend.
Miller Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 2:33 AM
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts
Canerdy Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Yes, the world seems to be getting colder and angrier! Your poem is excellent in every respect, Terry~~especially your "take" on the prompt. Janice
Miller Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 2:34 AM
It is true Janice thank you for the visit and your kind words
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 5:31 PM
your poem is a terrific creation for the contest prompt--unusual and a sure contender.
Miller Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 2:35 AM
I try to look at the prompts differently, it does not always work out competition wise, but it is fun, and I enjoy the challenge
Goldsmith Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 11:23 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Pondering the Pavement" write/story. Today, angry faces that need a free smile. I remember finding coins on the pavement but Not any more. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Miller Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 2:36 AM
Thank you Paula for your kind words
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:40 AM
Wow. You did the challenge so well. Wish this had come to me!! Bet it's a winner
Miller Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 2:36 AM
Andrea I appreciate all your support, thank you
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