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Pondering Life's Parade of Dreams

As fuchsia clouds caress a saffron sky, like pastel pillows in the eventide and bid this weary winter day goodbye, I sit alone and ponder dreams applied, and ask myself if always best I tried. The dreams in life which slowly drift on by, like fashioned floats parading ‘fore our eyes and calling us to grab them from the sky, are reaching out and tempting with their plies to jump aboard their float and claim our prize. For me the dreams which loudest called my name, the ones to which I gladly answered call to join parade of dreams and claim my fame, have shaped my life and left me standing tall when all of life seemed backed against a wall. But sometimes I still think of dreams gone by, the ones to which I turned my back and passed; can’t help but wonder with an aging sigh just how my journey might have been recast if had I chosen different dreams amassed. Yet as I ponder with each passing day and think of all the dreams in which I played, I know for certain one thing I must say there’s nothing I would change in judgements made as aging sun now sets on my parade. August 25, 2023

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Date: 9/30/2023 7:13:00 AM
I can relate to your poem about dreams John, Looking and thinking back i can remember 3 life changing oneS. The one I had when I was in hospital last year for a mistake my specialist made, was a horrific nightmare.. I do like your dreamy poem John and my best two lines are ' the dreams in life that slowly drift on by, like fashioned floats parading 'fore our eyes'. You are a wonderful poet John, in the past, now and forever will be as your legacy will live on. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/2/2023 2:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Jenn, I’m glad you liked my dreamy poem. Hugs, John
Date: 8/27/2023 11:37:00 PM
Love this one John. The title says it all. So thought provoking.In recent times, I have been doing a lot of pondering myself. Gorgeous poetic expression. I particularly love the last stanza ‘as aging sun now sets on my parade’. Glorious ending. So enjoyed reading it and found it inspiring. Many thanks for sharing.
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/28/2023 5:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christina, I'm glad you enjoyed my thoughts on the dreams we all have in our lives. It seems like the older we get the fewer new dreams we have and the more we ponder about past dreams. Hugs, John
Date: 8/25/2023 6:44:00 PM
In life, dreams have become unreachable, or so it seems. When the time is right, what's meant to be, certainly will be. Patience is a virtue, indeed. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. My best to you, my sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/28/2023 5:27:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, my dear friend. Sometimes frustration sets in when we realize that our dreams are unreachable. And the older we get, the harder it is to remain patient. Hugs, John
Date: 8/25/2023 1:31:00 PM
Such wonderful meter and rhymes John. And your message resonates. Who of us wouldn't change things if we could? Or at least some things. In the end, facing sunset, we make peace with the dreams we chose.
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/28/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Tommy, I appreciate it. John

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