Notes About The Poem

Written May 31 2026 for the Ponder contest sponsored by Constance LaFrance 

Ponder

“The present is what slips by us while we're pondering the past and worrying about the future.”
Ziggy Marley

An angel guides me despite my lack of faith 
In my own destined path blooming by grace
I am a weed in the green garden of Eden 
Dilemma is a tree a red apple in season

How I wish to be wise yet I can be a fool
Hoping to grow use mistakes as a stool
Caught up in life blindsided by events
Praying for time to make it right repent

I exist because an ancestor persevered 
Destiny is a kiss from heaven despite tears
I ponder the purple meaning of a licorice life
Have I made my mark as I attempt to fly

Pondering the past happiness is delayed 
Views in looking glass see eyes that prayed
Future is a kite rising above all clouds
Living life is art amethyst goals vows

As they plant opportunities like seeds for me
So shall I blossom for those who follow my lead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Ponder" write/story/ending... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Jones Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 4:00 PM
Thanks!
Guptar Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations Karen on your high win in this contest with a poem pondering on your destined path, with at times a humourous tone. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
Jones Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 10:14 AM
Thanks Krishnanand!
La France Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:34 AM
Karen, beautifully penned, love quote. Congratulations on your win in my Ponder Contest ~
Jones Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 7:39 AM
Your contest was a fun challenge Constance. I am thrilled by the placement! Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 7:53 PM
I'd like to echo Kim's comment below. Many memorable lines... And I want to add 'use mistakes as a stool.' Excellent, methinks. ~ gw
Jones Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 7:55 PM
Thank you dear Gershon!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 2:36 PM
I exist because an ancestor persevered Destiny is a kiss from heaven despite tears…in heaven, we will find out our influences…love it!
Jones Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 3:11 PM
Thanks for the love!
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