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Pond Ripples

I’m seeing red on the green Laying two on a par four my ball nowhere to be found A crow....pond ripples For Francine's "Red" contest

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Date: 2/21/2011 1:30:00 PM
LOL I guess you hafta golf! Light & Love
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Date: 2/14/2011 2:33:00 PM
This is quite good, Charles. A golfing bit of wit. Best wishes to you. I've been out of town and see I have missed much on PS. I very much enjoyed your blog on Free Verse. I'm not sure how to catorgize this form of writing either. It is rather loose and sloppy at times. Sorry I didn't write on your blog. Very limited Internet in northern Minnesota. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/7/2011 10:20:00 AM
Hi charles thanks for you help. My blog is up. It must be very relaxing playing golf. Did you make par four.
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:34:00 AM
Nice ! I'm not a golfer, but I can appreciate this :)
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