Pond Ripples

I’m seeing red on the green

Laying two on a par four

my ball nowhere to be found

A crow....pond ripples 


For Francine's "Red" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 1:30 PM
LOL I guess you hafta golf! Light & Love
Radke Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 2:33 PM
This is quite good, Charles. A golfing bit of wit. Best wishes to you. I've been out of town and see I have missed much on PS. I very much enjoyed your blog on Free Verse. I'm not sure how to catorgize this form of writing either. It is rather loose and sloppy at times. Sorry I didn't write on your blog. Very limited Internet in northern Minnesota. Love, Deb
Heckman Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Hi charles thanks for you help. My blog is up. It must be very relaxing playing golf. Did you make par four.
Bagnall Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Nice ! I'm not a golfer, but I can appreciate this :)
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