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Pond of Sunshine

A pond of sunshine lays on top of the snow Between the wooded trees in a morning glow A colorful circle is beckoning me to walk Into snow-covered land, where wildlife talk The storm has passed, leaving beauty behind Now the sun rises, bringing more to find Heidi Sands 3/26/23

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Date: 7/12/2023 6:59:00 PM
I love nature and writing about it like you. In your poem I can see a gentle large moose, a snow shoe hair and a red cardinal on your "pond of sunshine" It would be fun to illustrate this one. A chilly time of year, but words make it feel warm.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/13/2023 8:13:00 AM
What a great idea. Yes, I can see those animals there too. Lately a baby bear is nearby. It doesn't have a mother. Many animals wander these mountain woods. Thank you for your kind comment :)
Date: 6/4/2023 3:38:00 PM
Hello Heidi, this is a beautiful poem. It will be my fav. Hugs./Darlene\
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Date: 6/5/2023 2:59:00 PM
HelloHeidi, I am glad I made yur day brighter. Yes my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2023 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene. It brings a smile to hear that. I am happy you like it and I appreciate the Fave! :)
Date: 4/8/2023 10:44:00 PM
I don't experience snow where I live and have to trek quite a distance to other areas to experience it. Your poem made me nostalgic for past holidays. Nicely penned, Heidi. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/9/2023 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Suzette. We get a lot of it here. It is still melting, as we now wait for Spring. I hope you have a beautiful day :)
Date: 3/29/2023 6:59:00 PM
Gosh, this gem just sparkles, Heidi. Awesome penning, gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2023 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon. I appreciate your support always :)
Date: 3/29/2023 5:58:00 AM
What an outstanding poem - such warm thoughts in a snow covered land - well penned and great imagination. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2023 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. I was just thinking about you the other day. I must get over to your page soon. I hope all is well :)
Date: 3/28/2023 12:24:00 PM
Beautiful nature poem Heidi. I find it uplifting and hopeful. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2023 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Linda. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 3/27/2023 9:28:00 AM
Wow! Heidi, This is so beautiful. You painted a stunning picture with words. Thanks for sharing such a write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. I appreciate your visit and kind feedback. I hope you have a nice day too :)
Date: 3/27/2023 4:44:00 AM
An enjoyable read for me this morning. Beautifully written Heidi :-)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2023 5:57:00 AM
I am happy to hear that. Thank you Anne :)
Date: 3/27/2023 1:49:00 AM
What a beautiful write, Heidi!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2023 5:57:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 3/26/2023 1:09:00 PM
- A lovely winter landscape, Heidi :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2023 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine . Hugs :)
Date: 3/26/2023 12:48:00 PM
You've been walking again Heidi witnessing the beauty that nature provides. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2023 1:24:00 PM
I could see this through my window too. Thank you Tom. I hope you are enjoying this weekend :)
Date: 3/26/2023 10:21:00 AM
Glad to read this uplifting poem, Heidi. Sunshine on top of snow creates reflective delight as you infer in this write. Much enjoyed the scene you convey.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2023 11:41:00 AM
Yes , it was a pretty sight. The sun was rising and created a circle of color on top of the snow in the trees. I am happy you enjoyed reading this. Thank you :)
Date: 3/26/2023 8:03:00 AM
Great imagery in this p[oem, Heidi. The sun shinig on snow often looks like a lake or glass. A pleasure to read you this morning. Hoping you are well.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2023 8:16:00 AM
Thank you DT. Yes, it looked like that. I am happy you liked reading it this morning. I am ok thanks. I hope you are well too :)
Date: 3/26/2023 7:01:00 AM
A beatiful view in sunshine's glow, Wonderful write Heidi, Hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2023 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Joseph. It looked just like a pond on the snow. I hope you have a nice day. Hugs :)

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