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Pond

Playground for the waterfowl,
Other creatures swim there too, like the fish and frog.
Not a place for humans to swim, because it's gross!
Delightful to watch nature's daily dose.

Copyright © Miranda Hawley | Year Posted 2025

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Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/27/2025 4:51:00 PM your poem lifted me up. I loved this! hugs, Sara Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 6/14/2025 7:42:00 PM This made me giggle;0) Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 5/9/2025 7:18:00 PM Nice one because you made me laugh. You rolled with poetic imagery and then wrote '.. cause its gross' breaking from prose to REALITY. I was amused and enjoyed your acrostic. CayCay Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/8/2025 4:00:00 PM Nice one, Miranda. I used to wade in one to catch tadpoles! Login to Reply Miranda Hawley Date: 5/8/2025 7:01:00 PM I hope the one you waded in to catch tadpoles was a nicer one than the one in my backyard.

Valsa George Date: 5/3/2025 4:50:00 AM Beautifully written acrostic... dear Miranda. There are waterbodies for the frogs and fish to swim. But ponds and rivers are polluted and are not fit for man to swim. Very sad. Login to Reply Miranda Hawley Date: 5/8/2025 7:03:00 PM Yeah the pond in my back yard I'd never want to try to swim in. Thanks!