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Pompeii

When nature takes a turn for the worst grumbling rumbles shakes great balls of fire falling in her tears black snowfalls Burning smell of sulphur burns rolling down the mountains molten lava they salute death rivers of flames the chariots of Hell's fire Crying infants wailing out mercy embraced in their mothers arms held together with fathers They roared to the Gods for help falling silver ashes remains Imagining God had forsaken them as the skies disappeared from their eyes falling into the darkening death vision Their universe plunged into darkness Victims they felt death falling upon them A deadly feeling they are the children cursed by the damned volcano No where to run No where to hide They stop and the black ash swallows them like a carpet of night forever gone but always remembered in hearts the fall of a great city in living history truly lives forever in the archives of our time I would be the Celtic gladiator

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/2/2014 2:02:00 AM
Pompeii! Pompeii! love this piece for bringing me there!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/8/2014 9:41:00 AM
thank you ever so deeply wonderful comment hila heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/30/2014 12:44:00 PM
I am totally fascinated with Pompeii and I love the song "Pompeii" by Bastille. So, Liam, you can imagine how thrilled I am to read your amazing piece which has absolutely captivated me! Wow, I was transported back in time to that epic place! Thank you Liam for providing the time machine! Warmest regards, Pandita
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/8/2014 9:38:00 AM
smiling pandita wonderful comment dear friend it captivated me reading about it so i wrote this thank you kindly pal bless you
Date: 11/27/2014 5:02:00 PM
Dear Liam: Well done. It feels as though this was happening and your were there! All the best then, Leon.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/8/2014 9:32:00 AM
leon thank you ever so kindly for the truly wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/27/2014 2:49:00 PM
One might arrive to the conclusion you were there witnessing this catastrophe dear, Liam as Pliny the Younger this day of August 79 AD. A seven my dear for this superb poem!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/29/2014 3:49:00 PM
smiling demetrios i would be like a cold miner just looked up pliny very interesting thank you for the insight dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/27/2014 2:42:00 PM
A true story brought back and told through the words of Liam. They shall never be forgotten.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/29/2014 3:45:00 PM
yeah thought i would try to see it from the peoples view brenda thank you dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 11/27/2014 2:04:00 PM
Liam Me Mate!! A most wonderful dark pen indeed of Pompeii. A great depiction of a most terrible event in history. This is one for the Leprechaun Archives most definitely!! Good Be On Ya' Mate!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 2:36:00 PM
gary oh the leprechaun is going back in time pal he used his magic pen ha ha wonderful comment smiling with a taste of the fire water cheers sir buddy
Date: 11/27/2014 1:23:00 PM
Ow what dark moments..What a dey feeling indeed.Hope We ll never experience another Falling Citty.Your verses took me there Liam.Excellent post.Happy thanksgiving!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 2:30:00 PM
smiling a very happy thanks giving to you also charmaine we never really know what the future holds in the end thank you kindly dear pal have a great weekend
Date: 11/27/2014 12:52:00 PM
brilliantly penned depicting the destruction in that horrendous event Liam. Pompeii is a place I would love to visit one day:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 2:25:00 PM
yeah like those places myself jan they always draw on my list wonderful comment dear pal have a great weekend
Date: 11/27/2014 12:30:00 PM
Fantastic write, Liam. You captured the horror that must have been that day well. Great write.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 2:22:00 PM
looking at pictures of remains really brought this to life for me eileen wonderful comment dear friend thank you ever so kindly pal
Date: 11/27/2014 12:28:00 PM
My very dear Liam, this is an excellent piece of poetic very sad history you've penned here with your golden pen! Very dark and sad but well described my very dear friend. I really enjoyed reading it for you.A 7 +++++! Have a very wonderful evening! :) Love and hugs! ^0^xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 1:47:00 PM
yeah i was reading a piece about the time got me thinking then i got the movie thought how sad a way to end i saw remains of families huddled just tried to imagine what it was like must have been daunting wonderful comment dorian thank you kindly deeply appreciated

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