Pompeii

When nature takes a turn for the worst
grumbling rumbles shakes 
great balls of fire falling 
in her tears black snowfalls

Burning smell of sulphur burns
rolling down the mountains molten lava
they salute death rivers of flames
the chariots of Hell's fire

Crying infants wailing out mercy
embraced in their mothers arms
held together with fathers
They roared to the Gods for help  
falling silver ashes remains 

Imagining God had forsaken them
as the skies disappeared from their eyes
falling into the darkening death vision
Their universe plunged into darkness

Victims they felt death falling upon them
A deadly feeling they are the children 
cursed by the damned volcano
No where to run
No where to hide

They stop and the black ash swallows them
like a carpet of night forever gone 
but always remembered in hearts 
the fall of a great city in living history 
truly lives forever in the archives of our time 




I would be the Celtic gladiator
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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De La Luna Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 2:02 AM
Pompeii! Pompeii! love this piece for bringing me there!
Mcdaid Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:41 AM
thank you ever so deeply wonderful comment hila heartfelt appreciated bless you
Sietesantos Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:44 PM
I am totally fascinated with Pompeii and I love the song "Pompeii" by Bastille. So, Liam, you can imagine how thrilled I am to read your amazing piece which has absolutely captivated me! Wow, I was transported back in time to that epic place! Thank you Liam for providing the time machine! Warmest regards, Pandita
Mcdaid Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:38 AM
smiling pandita wonderful comment dear friend it captivated me reading about it so i wrote this thank you kindly pal bless you
Enriquez Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 5:02 PM
Dear Liam: Well done. It feels as though this was happening and your were there! All the best then, Leon.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:32 AM
leon thank you ever so kindly for the truly wonderful comment bless you
Trifiatis Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 2:49 PM
One might arrive to the conclusion you were there witnessing this catastrophe dear, Liam as Pliny the Younger this day of August 79 AD. A seven my dear for this superb poem!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 3:49 PM
smiling demetrios i would be like a cold miner just looked up pliny very interesting thank you for the insight dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 2:42 PM
A true story brought back and told through the words of Liam. They shall never be forgotten.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 3:45 PM
yeah thought i would try to see it from the peoples view brenda thank you dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Bateman Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 2:04 PM
Liam Me Mate!! A most wonderful dark pen indeed of Pompeii. A great depiction of a most terrible event in history. This is one for the Leprechaun Archives most definitely!! Good Be On Ya' Mate!! Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 2:36 PM
gary oh the leprechaun is going back in time pal he used his magic pen ha ha wonderful comment smiling with a taste of the fire water cheers sir buddy
Chircop Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Ow what dark moments..What a dey feeling indeed.Hope We ll never experience another Falling Citty.Your verses took me there Liam.Excellent post.Happy thanksgiving!!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 2:30 PM
smiling a very happy thanks giving to you also charmaine we never really know what the future holds in the end thank you kindly dear pal have a great weekend
Allison Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 12:52 PM
brilliantly penned depicting the destruction in that horrendous event Liam. Pompeii is a place I would love to visit one day:-) hugs Jan xxx
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 2:25 PM
yeah like those places myself jan they always draw on my list wonderful comment dear pal have a great weekend
Manassian Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Fantastic write, Liam. You captured the horror that must have been that day well. Great write.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 2:22 PM
looking at pictures of remains really brought this to life for me eileen wonderful comment dear friend thank you ever so kindly pal
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 12:28 PM
My very dear Liam, this is an excellent piece of poetic very sad history you've penned here with your golden pen! Very dark and sad but well described my very dear friend. I really enjoyed reading it for you.A 7 +++++! Have a very wonderful evening! :) Love and hugs! ^0^xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 1:47 PM
yeah i was reading a piece about the time got me thinking then i got the movie thought how sad a way to end i saw remains of families huddled just tried to imagine what it was like must have been daunting wonderful comment dorian thank you kindly deeply appreciated
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