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Pompei

Lucius Gauis Viaggi was a centurion in the Roman army
Lived in the city of Pompei with his wife and family
The city lay at the foot of the majestic Mount Vesuvius 
It was the year 79 AD in the reign of the Emperor Titus.

Lucius was home on leave from the campaign in Brittania
And was enjoying his time away in his luxurious villa
He got up late one October morning to go for a walk
To meet with friends, drink wine and to catch up on talk.

It had just gone noon when the ground started shaking violently
Many rushed out onto the streets to escape the falling masonry
Above the city Mount Vesuvius was spewing ash and fire
Lucius was no stranger to danger and knew that it was dire.

Huge white clouds were forming and ash fell like snow 
He rushed back to his villa and told everyone "Save yourselves and go"
Then got two horses ready for himself and his wife Ameili
And put his son on his horse and rode towards Napoli.

Thousands scrambled down the hillside to get far away
Lucius could hear the screams of those poor souls who chose to stay
Then came the molten rock, ash and gas known as the pyroclastic flow
Pompei was buried in minutes, and the living had nowhere to go.

Those who'd taken shelter in buildings were gasping for breath 
Their lungs filled with toxic gas and ash and it's how they met their death
Those who had escaped were making their way to Napoli
Some had walked,  many on horseback and some arrived by sea.

Four other towns were destroyed by the eruption of Mt Vesuvius 
Hercanaleum, Stabiae, Boscoreale and Oplontis
Gaius Plinius Secundus a commander in the Roman navy
Died trying to rescue people and is remembered for his bravery.

The streets of Napoli were crowded with the thousands who'd fled
Those who had decided to stay in Pompei were already dead
In Napoli Lucius had a friend with a large villa Luigi Maven
Who welcomed them saying , "Let my home be your safe haven".

A week later Lucius rode back to see what had become of Pompei 
It was now just a white wasteland where thousands underneath lay
Smoke and dust continued to rise from the top of the mountain    
The winds had saved Napoli of that Lucius was certain.
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Trifiatis Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 2:53 AM
Captivating and informative narration, my dearest friend, Tom. Where you there with Pliny the younger? It seems so. Have a marvellous day!
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 4:37 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios, he was lucky to escape unlike his father who perished in a rescue mission. Just back from Italy, the architecture is amazing especially in Rome, sadly we only had 4 hours to see it. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 1:32 AM
An epic narrative deserving of many views and lauding comments, Tom. It’s the downfall of Poetry Soup… just as it was in Pompei.
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 4:40 AM
Thank you very much Lin, we've felt the tremors for some time now and we know whats coming. Get out while you can lol. I'm curious and wondering if this will be voted by members, I won't hold my breath. Tom🌹
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September 22, 2026 at 3:11 AM
I am fourteen years with PoetrySoup and I unfortunately tend agree with you, my dearest lady. I owe a lot to PoetrySoup and I have repeatedly expressed my gratitude to the site ☺️
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