Pom Poms For Maureen and Jan

POM POMS FOR MAUREEN AND JAN

Maureen’s titillating poem, tit for tat.
Excitement of goosebumps,
sure as tease, shown in verse.
She has Jan’s front and back.

An exclamation - a sisterhood shout:
what’s this all about - birds or not?
Unfortunately, my title can’t wink,
smile or rise in peaks of zenith blue.

Two sets of pom-poms fly in my face…
My irreverent revue seeks second place.

4/19/2018

Reference:
Maureen McGreavy’s “POINT FOR EXCLAMATION - FOR JAN
Jan Allison’s “I’VE GOT BLUE ****
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 3:34 PM
LOL <3
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 6:34 PM
I did not seen Maureen's poem, but Jan's sure is fun!!~ Cute writing, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I am sure you will enjoy!
Gauthier Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Very cute, Kim. Love your "peaks of zenith blue". Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Thanks, my friend!
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Oh I am blushing now I've been exposed lol lol:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 5:15 PM
LOL! Blushing beauties stick together...
Callus Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:33 PM
You too know how to entertain, Kim:) Very enjoyable, having had the benefit of reading both their poems. Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Thanks, Paul!
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