Paul Schneiter Poet Limerick

Pollution Solution

Smaltz loved limburger cheese with passion
A fact that turned co-workers’ noses ashen.
The stench made ill all near his breath
Notes on his locker hinted at death.
Smaltz now finds cheddar fragrantly in fashion.

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Tim Smith May 28, 2015 at 8:49 PM Wrote one about onion breath... Lol Paul Schneiter May 28, 2015 at 11:24 PM Indeed you did, and it has me laughing (between burps) loudly, prompting my wife to ask what's going on in my office. (See my comments on your site.) Thank you.

Tim Smith May 27, 2015 at 10:48 PM Nice one Paul....I might have to go one about onion breath.... Paul Schneiter May 28, 2015 at 7:53 AM Thank you, Tim. I value your comments. You could create a classic on the subject of onion breath. I hope you'll write it.

Casarah Nance May 27, 2015 at 8:18 PM LOl fun limerick Paul Schneiter May 27, 2015 at 8:46 PM Thank you, Casarah. Your positive response is heartening.

Judy Konos May 27, 2015 at 8:13 PM That's an LOL......loved it ...thanks Paul Schneiter May 27, 2015 at 8:48 PM It's kind and thoughtful of you to comment, Judy, and to say such nice things. Please know that I appreciate it.

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 7:58 PM Lol... Paul Schneiter May 27, 2015 at 9:00 PM SKAT, as I have said before, I hold a response from you in high regard. So, thank you, thank you. (More correctly, I value and appreciate responses from all Soupers . . . every one is precious to me.)

Charmaine Chircop May 27, 2015 at 7:21 PM Haha..lol : ) Paul Schneiter May 27, 2015 at 8:53 PM Do you suppose that grilled cheese sandwich I had for lunch "inspired" me? (I have to blame it on something.) * * * Thanks for taking time to comment, Charmaine; I DO appreciate it.

Kim Merryman May 27, 2015 at 7:11 PM Great limerick, Paul! I like it! Love, Kim Paul Schneiter May 27, 2015 at 8:55 PM Thank you, Kim. I value and appreciate your feedback. Love and hugs, always.