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Pollution Solution

Smaltz loved limburger cheese with passion
A fact that turned co-workers’ noses ashen.
The stench made ill all near his breath
Notes on his locker hinted at death.
Smaltz now finds cheddar fragrantly in fashion.

Copyright © Paul Schneiter | Year Posted 2015

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Tim Smith Date: 5/28/2015 8:49:00 PM Wrote one about onion breath... Lol Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 5/28/2015 11:24:00 PM Indeed you did, and it has me laughing (between burps) loudly, prompting my wife to ask what's going on in my office. (See my comments on your site.) Thank you.

Tim Smith Date: 5/27/2015 10:48:00 PM Nice one Paul....I might have to go one about onion breath.... Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 5/28/2015 7:53:00 AM Thank you, Tim. I value your comments. You could create a classic on the subject of onion breath. I hope you'll write it.

Casarah Nance Date: 5/27/2015 8:18:00 PM LOl fun limerick Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 5/27/2015 8:46:00 PM Thank you, Casarah. Your positive response is heartening.

Judy Konos Date: 5/27/2015 8:13:00 PM That's an LOL......loved it ...thanks Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 5/27/2015 8:48:00 PM It's kind and thoughtful of you to comment, Judy, and to say such nice things. Please know that I appreciate it.

Skat A Date: 5/27/2015 7:58:00 PM Lol... Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 5/27/2015 9:00:00 PM SKAT, as I have said before, I hold a response from you in high regard. So, thank you, thank you. (More correctly, I value and appreciate responses from all Soupers . . . every one is precious to me.)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/27/2015 7:21:00 PM Haha..lol : ) Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 5/27/2015 8:53:00 PM Do you suppose that grilled cheese sandwich I had for lunch "inspired" me? (I have to blame it on something.) * * * Thanks for taking time to comment, Charmaine; I DO appreciate it.

Kim Merryman Date: 5/27/2015 7:11:00 PM Great limerick, Paul! I like it! Love, Kim Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 5/27/2015 8:55:00 PM Thank you, Kim. I value and appreciate your feedback. Love and hugs, always.