Polluion

oh polluution pollution 
why are you becoming more dangerous 
oh one day i ask mother earth
she said "she dont like us "
i ask why she was crying and crying
and said that we are not caring 
i said sorry sorry 



now we should pledge that we should not let her cry 
we should fry the pollution
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 29, 2016 at 12:34 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Neekita. :)
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May 26, 2016 at 6:58 AM
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