Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

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Pollination

haven of flowers

   gyrates through a bee’s travel

      nectarines  reward

        the fertile dance of bloom’s life…

 weaving  sweet nature’s puzzle.



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Contest: Life Is A Puzzle
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
12/25/2015

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Eve Roper December 30, 2015 at 6:03 PM Congratulations on your win! Have a very safe and Happy New Year's! Hugs Eve

Michael Tor December 30, 2015 at 3:12 PM Nice win Nette enjoy reading. /Congratulations.

Skat A December 29, 2015 at 9:36 PM Nette, Congratulations on your win... SKAT

Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 9:26 PM Absolutely amazing, Nette! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2015 at 5:10 PM way to go, Nette!! BIG congrats.

Susan Gentry December 29, 2015 at 4:51 PM Congratulations! Excellent!

Jan Allison December 29, 2015 at 2:58 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 29, 2015 at 2:50 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Nette.

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2015 at 5:05 PM One of the more inventive ones I have seen in this contest. Awesome, Nette.

Skat A December 25, 2015 at 4:02 PM Nette, thank you for sharing your poem *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT

Paul Callus December 25, 2015 at 3:15 PM You have shared a lot in these five lines, Nette. I am tempted by the nectarine reward and the fertile dance!! #7 hugs /// paul

Carly Lalion December 24, 2015 at 11:02 PM Fertility dance! I like that!

Jan Allison December 24, 2015 at 3:52 PM Very cleverly penned Nette it is quite a challenge to get the words into 5 short lines:-) hugs Jan xx