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Polka Dots

Her dressy-dress with polka dots. As boys count them they get the hots. They stop at thighs. Swirl of those pert little circles, higher and higher encircles. Fever does rise. Like a quiz, eyes fill in the dots. One by one the boys take a shot. They birth their lies. Each competitive archer, shoots For the center, as the prize hoots — Her laugh not shy. Those little pearls of color red and her dressy-dress knocks them dead, as lost boys sigh. Except for one boy whose hatching a plot — he’s wearing a matching polka dot tie. 1/9/2019 Polka Dots/Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/22/2019 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Kim!:) Lovely!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2019 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Edward!
Date: 1/13/2019 10:12:00 PM
Unbelievably hot fun. // As far as I'm concerned, it's already won!! ... Great entry for the contest---or stand-alone masterpiece. Best wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2019 10:14:00 PM
Thanks so much! Encouraged :)
Date: 1/13/2019 4:27:00 PM
What a flirty little dress! I just learned how to do tail-rhyme, so clever for the contest, best of luck!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2019 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 1/9/2019 4:59:00 PM
Oh this is SO fun! :))) My best to you in the contest! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2019 5:16:00 PM
Thank you so much :)

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