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In Florida one right hot summer

A free soul was havin' a bummer

So in spray painted undies

One holiday Monday

He split to the Springs with his rummer.

Polka Dot Swimming Trunks

In Florida one right hot summer
A free soul was havin' a bummer
So in spray painted undies
Next holiday Monday
He split to the Springs with his rummer.

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Equally inspired by a net(te) comment and the lovely natural resources in North Florida
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one..Creative individual..Sara
Sivey Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:18 PM
It's nice to see great humor like this! You know the decent good humored poems! Thank you for brightening my evening!!
Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:14 PM
Hahah, nice humor, nancy
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