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Polite

The biggest surprise in the suburbs, Where I helped out on Halloween night, Wasn’t focused on candy or costumes, But the kids, who were just so polite! Whether solo or part of a gaggle, Dressed as witches or pirates or queens, They approached in a calm, measured manner, While their parents looked on, dressed in jeans. “Trick or treat!” they exclaimed, sporting smiles, As I offered the candy-filled bowl. When I told them, “Take two,” they said “Thank you!” As if being polite was the goal. No one pushed or took more than was offered; All were patient and many did shout, “Have a great Halloween!” as they parted, Not a one with a sneer or a pout. It was wonderful watching this happen - Just a night filled with nothing but fun. The true magic will be if politeness Stays alive when their childhoods are done.

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Date: 11/4/2024 5:52:00 AM
I'd say your encounter with such well mannered kids is rare for these days, Ilene! The bigger question is: Will those same kids carry their good manners lifelong? Lets hope so. / Maurice
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Date: 11/2/2024 7:08:00 PM
This poem was uplifting. Your neighborhood sounds like it has good children and responsible parents. I smiled at the happiness.
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Date: 11/1/2024 10:16:00 PM
So true Ilene, had a few isolated cases over here where some kids get abusive and rowdy. Tom
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