Richard Lamoureux Poet Triolet

Pole Dancer

I just love the way she dances.
The way around the pole she twirls.
With such confidence she prances.
I just love the way she dances!
She is not afraid to take chances.
Around the May pole with other girls.
I just love the way she dances.
The way around the pole she twirls!

Tell me which Triolet I should enter into Freddie's Contest

For Freddie's Triolet Contest.
Written September 27th, 2014.

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Debbie Guzzi October 21, 2014 at 9:24 AM Oh I think he will like this one! (You know we are all pole dancers whether we own/have one or not ;) ) Light & Love Richard Lamoureux October 21, 2014 at 9:32 AM Sadly Freddie canceled the contest. Thanks for the visit Debbie.

Timothy Hicks October 13, 2014 at 4:56 PM Pole Dancer, eh? Not something I'd expect you would write, Rick! Been at the late night clubs?? Lol... I apologize for my long absence. I know I've been gone for over a year... I've been busy with a couple other jobs and haven't been keeping up with the site. I hope you may forgive me... it looks like I got some catching up to do! Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2014 at 5:33 PM I'm glad you are back and well. Thanks for reading and commenting on my writing.

Monterey Sirak October 4, 2014 at 9:21 AM Enter this one! My high school has had a May fete for over a hundred years. The senior girls always wind the may pole, so beautiful to watch. Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2014 at 5:34 PM I have never witnessed the May Pole myself. I should google it.

Paul Callus October 3, 2014 at 12:43 PM I love this triolet, Richard. It has a kind of youthful innocence about it (after being taken in by the title). // paul Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2014 at 5:36 PM Ha ha, it appears I accomplished my goal.

Justin Bordner October 1, 2014 at 8:53 PM An ancient ritual of fertile seduction, the twirl of a beautiful girl. Enchanting write Richard. Women are magic. J.A.B. Richard Lamoureux October 2, 2014 at 8:27 AM Good morning Justin, I totally agree.

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2014 at 3:59 PM oh my, it's a MAY pole This one is SO cool. It's my favorite so far that I've seen of triolets. Just so creative, Richard!! Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2014 at 6:06 PM Thanks Andrea, I thought I would turn naughty into nice.

Eileen Manassian September 28, 2014 at 10:51 AM Good one, Richard. You know my opinion on which on to enter. Wanted to come back and visit a little with you. It's simply amazing, this poem of yours! Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2014 at 6:07 PM Thanks, I have entered this one. Now I will cross my fingers.

Liam Mcdaid September 28, 2014 at 7:05 AM always a delight in reading richard Richard Lamoureux September 28, 2014 at 8:40 AM Thanks Liam.

Connie Marcum Wong September 28, 2014 at 3:22 AM After just reading the other, I am kind of fonder of this one. The imagery inspires vivid colors and joy. Richard Lamoureux September 28, 2014 at 8:41 AM Thanks, it seems there is a consensus so I have switched to this one.

Casarah Nance September 27, 2014 at 6:40 PM This is really cool I like that I thought it was naughty and it wasn't so much, very good! Richard Lamoureux September 28, 2014 at 8:44 AM I took a page out of your book on this one Casarah. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Debbie Guzzi September 27, 2014 at 4:06 PM really charming, crystal clear imagery Light & Love Richard Lamoureux September 28, 2014 at 8:44 AM Good morning and thanks Debbie.

Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 7:58 AM this one Richard - it made me smile:-) Hugs jan xxx Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 9:29 AM Thanks Jan!