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Pole Dancer

I just love the way she dances. The way around the pole she twirls. With such confidence she prances. I just love the way she dances! She is not afraid to take chances. Around the May pole with other girls. I just love the way she dances. The way around the pole she twirls! Tell me which Triolet I should enter into Freddie's Contest For Freddie's Triolet Contest. Written September 27th, 2014.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/21/2014 9:24:00 AM

Oh I think he will like this one! (You know we are all pole dancers whether we own/have one or not ;) ) Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2014 9:32:00 AM

Sadly Freddie canceled the contest. Thanks for the visit Debbie.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/13/2014 4:56:00 PM

Pole Dancer, eh? Not something I'd expect you would write, Rick! Been at the late night clubs?? Lol... I apologize for my long absence. I know I've been gone for over a year... I've been busy with a couple other jobs and haven't been keeping up with the site. I hope you may forgive me... it looks like I got some catching up to do!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/13/2014 5:33:00 PM

I'm glad you are back and well. Thanks for reading and commenting on my writing.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/4/2014 9:21:00 AM

Enter this one! My high school has had a May fete for over a hundred years. The senior girls always wind the may pole, so beautiful to watch.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/13/2014 5:34:00 PM

I have never witnessed the May Pole myself. I should google it.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/3/2014 12:43:00 PM

I love this triolet, Richard. It has a kind of youthful innocence about it (after being taken in by the title). // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/13/2014 5:36:00 PM

Ha ha, it appears I accomplished my goal.

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/1/2014 8:53:00 PM

An ancient ritual of fertile seduction, the twirl of a beautiful girl. Enchanting write Richard. Women are magic. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/2/2014 8:27:00 AM

Good morning Justin, I totally agree.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2014 3:59:00 PM

oh my, it's a MAY pole This one is SO cool. It's my favorite so far that I've seen of triolets. Just so creative, Richard!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/29/2014 6:06:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I thought I would turn naughty into nice.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/28/2014 10:51:00 AM

Good one, Richard. You know my opinion on which on to enter. Wanted to come back and visit a little with you. It's simply amazing, this poem of yours!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/29/2014 6:07:00 PM

Thanks, I have entered this one. Now I will cross my fingers.