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Pole Dancer

I just love the way she dances.
The way around the pole she twirls.
With such confidence she prances.
I just love the way she dances!
She is not afraid to take chances.
Around the May pole with other girls.
I just love the way she dances.
The way around the pole she twirls!

Tell me which Triolet I should enter into Freddie's Contest

For Freddie's Triolet Contest.
Written September 27th, 2014.

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/21/2014 9:24:00 AM Oh I think he will like this one! (You know we are all pole dancers whether we own/have one or not ;) ) Light & Love Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/21/2014 9:32:00 AM Sadly Freddie canceled the contest. Thanks for the visit Debbie.

Timothy Hicks Date: 10/13/2014 4:56:00 PM Pole Dancer, eh? Not something I'd expect you would write, Rick! Been at the late night clubs?? Lol... I apologize for my long absence. I know I've been gone for over a year... I've been busy with a couple other jobs and haven't been keeping up with the site. I hope you may forgive me... it looks like I got some catching up to do! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/13/2014 5:33:00 PM I'm glad you are back and well. Thanks for reading and commenting on my writing.

Monterey Sirak Date: 10/4/2014 9:21:00 AM Enter this one! My high school has had a May fete for over a hundred years. The senior girls always wind the may pole, so beautiful to watch. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/13/2014 5:34:00 PM I have never witnessed the May Pole myself. I should google it.

Paul Callus Date: 10/3/2014 12:43:00 PM I love this triolet, Richard. It has a kind of youthful innocence about it (after being taken in by the title). // paul Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/13/2014 5:36:00 PM Ha ha, it appears I accomplished my goal.

Justin Bordner Date: 10/1/2014 8:53:00 PM An ancient ritual of fertile seduction, the twirl of a beautiful girl. Enchanting write Richard. Women are magic. J.A.B. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/2/2014 8:27:00 AM Good morning Justin, I totally agree.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/29/2014 3:59:00 PM oh my, it's a MAY pole This one is SO cool. It's my favorite so far that I've seen of triolets. Just so creative, Richard!! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/29/2014 6:06:00 PM Thanks Andrea, I thought I would turn naughty into nice.

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/28/2014 10:51:00 AM Good one, Richard. You know my opinion on which on to enter. Wanted to come back and visit a little with you. It's simply amazing, this poem of yours! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/29/2014 6:07:00 PM Thanks, I have entered this one. Now I will cross my fingers.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/28/2014 7:05:00 AM always a delight in reading richard Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/28/2014 8:40:00 AM Thanks Liam.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/28/2014 3:22:00 AM After just reading the other, I am kind of fonder of this one. The imagery inspires vivid colors and joy. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/28/2014 8:41:00 AM Thanks, it seems there is a consensus so I have switched to this one.

Casarah Nance Date: 9/27/2014 6:40:00 PM This is really cool I like that I thought it was naughty and it wasn't so much, very good! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/28/2014 8:44:00 AM I took a page out of your book on this one Casarah. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/27/2014 4:06:00 PM really charming, crystal clear imagery Light & Love Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/28/2014 8:44:00 AM Good morning and thanks Debbie.

Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2014 7:58:00 AM this one Richard - it made me smile:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/27/2014 9:29:00 AM Thanks Jan!