Polar Bears

Symphonic sirens serenade me from afar;
distinctive, delectable scents tickle and tantalise:
my senses awash with anticipation
as, finally, I lay eyes on my prey.

Slowly and surreptitiously,
I draw ever closer to my quarry.
Prancing and playing, oblivious to the danger I present,
their movements trigger something deep inside:
something ancient...
something powerful...
something dark.

The need to bite, to rend, to feed, is all-consuming;
but I am no monster, driven by base desires.
Salivating, I cast off my instinctive urges,
instead focusing on a solitary sentinel
positioned on the periphery of the pack.

Suddenly, it jerks its head in my direction.
Keeping my back down, I drop as low as I can,
pressing myself into the frozen ground.
Enormous paws clamp across my jet-black snout,
effectively camouflaging me against the ice,
as my mother taught me and her mother before her.

I remain motionless, barely even breathing...
time stretches interminably and,
just when age-old bestial instincts threaten to re-emerge,
the sentry finally returns its attention
to its frolicking brethren.

I skulk ever-closer...
closer...
closer...
and then:
I POUNCE!

Swinging my massive right paw in a blur of motion, 
I land a surgical strike on my unwitting victim's neck.
Fulgurating talons sink deep into its flesh,
gouging multiple parallel crimson furrows.

In the ensuing chaos, the rest of the herd scatters,
thwarting my hopes of snaring a second kill.
I cast a gaze at the pitiful creature pinned beneath me,
somehow still clutching to life.
Unmoved by its whimpered mewls,
I tear out the remnants of its throat with my teeth.

My roar reverberates around the landscape,
before I feast on the still-steaming corpse at my feet.
Seconds later, a response... weaker, but no less fearsome
and my heretofore unseen protégé progeny
suddenly bounds across the tundra towards me.

I step to one side and he immediately buries his head
in the ragged opening I've already torn in the carcass.
Masticating noisily, he savours his first taste of blubber.
I note with satisfaction his scarlet-stained snout
and the viscera-drenched fur around his maw.
He has learnt his lesson well.

Whatever your impression of us, know this:
we are not cute;
we are not cuddly.
We are furry furies,
snow-encrusted behemoths
and apex predators:
the absolute pinnacle of the food chain.

Should our paths ever cross, you'd do well to remember that.

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3 December 2017

For Julia Ward's "Polar Bears" contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 1:54 AM
John, I was captivated from beginning to end. Superb writing! : )
Michaels Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 5:13 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Connie. Am really pleased you liked my little story. Kind regards, John.
Ashley Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 5:27 PM
John, a fierce hard-hitting personification poem of a polar bear doing what polar bears do, brilliantly depicted without sentimentality - I love your last stanza and last line especially! A captivating and alluring write and your lovely alliteration was certainly not lost on me :) Shining and entrancing poetry my friend.
Michaels Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 5:10 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and wonderful comments. Always most appreciated!! Kind regards, John.
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Well, way to edit, John!!!
Michaels Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:24 AM
Thanks, Andrea! Regards, John.
Callus Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 10:49 AM
Excellent descriptive imagery and sprinklings of alliteration abound in this free verse personification, John. Kept my full attention from beginning to end! In my eyes, a sure winner! Regards // paul
Michaels Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:24 AM
Thanks very much, Paul! Free Verse is always a tricky one - is it poetry / is it prose? Kind regards, John.
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 4:49 PM
wow, John, OUTSTANDING delivery of life from the polar bear's OWN viewpoint!!
Michaels Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! My original effort was nearly twice the word count, but massively exceeded the character limits for posting on here (non-Premium = 2,500), so severe editing required!! Seemed to work though! Kind regards, John.
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