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Poisonous Love

a delicious lie -- my heart was hungry

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Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 2:36 PM

great monoku, easy to picture the inevitable result. Most of us can say: been there, done that. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta

December 28, 2017 at 4:37 AM

Ha ha ha ... Awesome ... Congratulations ...

Riley Hood

December 30, 2017 at 12:26 PM

Thank you!

Eve Roper

December 27, 2017 at 8:45 PM

this a very nice poem, Riley, congratulations on your win! hugs eve

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve!

Paul Callus

December 27, 2017 at 11:54 AM

When the heart yearns for love, even a delicious white lie can be forgiven, Riley! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:03 PM

Sometimes a candied lie hurts more than a sharp! Hopefully love won't always have to come to that, though! Thank you, Paul :)

James Inman

December 27, 2017 at 12:56 AM

This is great Riley, eat it up.

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:05 PM

Thank you! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 26, 2017 at 10:24 PM

Oh this is awesome! Congratulations on your win! :) xomo

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:05 PM

Thanks so much :) xo

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2017 at 9:33 PM

wow, that is short, but packed with a strong message. Loved this!

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:07 PM

Its's amazing how such small words can pack such a strong punch. Thanks so much for reading :)

Susan Ashley

December 26, 2017 at 7:43 PM

Returning with congratulations Riley for your top win with this creative and incredible write. ~Susan

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:07 PM

Thank you so much, Susan!

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 6:26 PM

Excellent monoku! Congratulations on your top win Riley !!! ~ Judy

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:09 PM

Much appreciated, Thanks, Judy :))

Janice Canerdy

December 26, 2017 at 4:09 PM

Ah, yes--that "delicious lie" we pretend to fall for . . . Congrats, Riley! Janice

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:10 PM

Hopefully I'm past the stage for falling for them now Lol. Thank you, Janice :)

Charlie Smith

December 26, 2017 at 3:07 PM

Congratulations RILEY, well done...

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:11 PM

Thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 26, 2017 at 2:57 PM

- Riley, wonderful monoku - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:12 PM

Thank you!!!

Silent One

December 26, 2017 at 1:33 PM

Very creative and clever Riley.. Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest..

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:13 PM

Thank you so much!! love your work!

Susan Ashley

December 22, 2017 at 10:40 AM

Wow! Riley your write is enthralling, enticing and a delectable morsel to linger over. Fantastic and alluring title and poetry. I so enjoyed your 'delicious' offering this morning.. ~Susan

Riley Hood

December 27, 2017 at 11:14 PM

Reading this comment made my entire night. Thank you so very much for this, Susan. Im so glad you enjoyed it!!

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