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Poisonous Love

a delicious lie -- my heart was hungry

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 2:36:00 PM

great monoku, easy to picture the inevitable result. Most of us can say: been there, done that. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/28/2017 4:37:00 AM

Ha ha ha ... Awesome ... Congratulations ...

Riley Hood
Date: 12/30/2017 12:26:00 PM

Thank you!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2017 8:45:00 PM

this a very nice poem, Riley, congratulations on your win! hugs eve

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2017 11:54:00 AM

When the heart yearns for love, even a delicious white lie can be forgiven, Riley! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:03:00 PM

Sometimes a candied lie hurts more than a sharp! Hopefully love won't always have to come to that, though! Thank you, Paul :)

James Inman

Date: 12/27/2017 12:56:00 AM

This is great Riley, eat it up.

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:05:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/26/2017 10:24:00 PM

Oh this is awesome! Congratulations on your win! :) xomo

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:05:00 PM

Thanks so much :) xo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2017 9:33:00 PM

wow, that is short, but packed with a strong message. Loved this!

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:07:00 PM

Its's amazing how such small words can pack such a strong punch. Thanks so much for reading :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/26/2017 7:43:00 PM

Returning with congratulations Riley for your top win with this creative and incredible write. ~Susan

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan!

Judith S

Date: 12/26/2017 6:26:00 PM

Excellent monoku! Congratulations on your top win Riley !!! ~ Judy

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:09:00 PM

Much appreciated, Thanks, Judy :))

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/26/2017 4:09:00 PM

Ah, yes--that "delicious lie" we pretend to fall for . . . Congrats, Riley! Janice

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:10:00 PM

Hopefully I'm past the stage for falling for them now Lol. Thank you, Janice :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/26/2017 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations RILEY, well done...

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:11:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2017 2:57:00 PM

- Riley, wonderful monoku - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:12:00 PM

Thank you!!!

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2017 1:33:00 PM

Very creative and clever Riley.. Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest..

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:13:00 PM

Thank you so much!! love your work!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/22/2017 10:40:00 AM

Wow! Riley your write is enthralling, enticing and a delectable morsel to linger over. Fantastic and alluring title and poetry. I so enjoyed your 'delicious' offering this morning.. ~Susan

Riley Hood
Date: 12/27/2017 11:14:00 PM

Reading this comment made my entire night. Thank you so very much for this, Susan. Im so glad you enjoyed it!!