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Poisoned Mind, the Backwards Poem

Doubt 
From her
Poisoned 
Everything
Death set in
Men of tears the
Blamelessly leave
Loss of souls praying
Kings of Feelings trapped 
The cleverly
Changing façade, 
Die to self, 
One forcing  
Love her 
Clasped 
Guise 

8/11/16

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/12/2016 12:53:00 AM

This is so wonderfully written, each word feels precisely chosen for it's intense emotional impact. That it is also a "backward" poem, your skills are definitely elevated to my mind. Great writing, evocative, a real pleasure to read. blessings, lynn

Roses Roses
Date: 8/16/2016 3:35:00 PM

I'll definitely check him out, thanks for the tip!

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/12/2016 1:25:00 AM

..check out poet "James Inman"..he is one of the best..good luck to you :-)

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/12/2016 1:21:00 AM

it's the truth :-) maybe try to enter a contest...you would be among others who are talented like you... it would challenge you..give you exposure..you have it within you...keep on writing:-)

Roses Roses
Date: 8/12/2016 12:58:00 AM

Thank you so much for the kind words, this compliment means a lot!