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Points to Ponder

Sailing on an ocean breeze 

In the vast depths of my mind 

Like a sailor on the open seas 

With a world of wonders to find 

Perusing points to ponder 

Through the night unto the morn 

On a global scale I'll wander 

Till an epiphany is born

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Jerry Brotherton

July 5, 2024 at 7:13 PM

Congratulations on POTD, my friend.

Randy Freie

July 5, 2024 at 10:05 PM

Thanks Jerry, I really appreciate that little brother. Take care.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 5, 2024 at 5:54 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Randy :) - hugs

Randy Freie

July 5, 2024 at 9:41 AM

Thank you, I really appreciate your feedback and support.

Krish Radhakrishna

July 4, 2024 at 12:44 PM

lovely poem! congrats on POTD!!

Randy Freie

July 4, 2024 at 1:53 PM

Thanks Krish, I really appreciate it.

Panagiota Romios

July 3, 2024 at 5:22 PM

Awesome, Randy! Congratulatiobs to you. Well done….Pangie

Randy Freie

July 4, 2024 at 9:21 AM

Thanks Pangie, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your feedback and support.

Gershon Wolf

July 3, 2024 at 2:06 PM

Once again, with feeling, Randy -- counting on that epiphany! Congrats on POTD. Oceans and Seas, Gershon

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 2:50 PM

Well thank you brother, I'm twice as appreciative for your comments.

Brandy Nicole

July 3, 2024 at 1:47 PM

Thoughts are ' sailing on an ocean breeze, like a sailor on the open seas. ' I love everything about this statement. There's something so soothing about letting the wind guide your thoughts. When the time is right, words will caress the page. Congratulations Randy, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 2:47 PM

Hi Brandy, being a Navy veteran, I remember incredible starlit nights and warm ocean breezes that still inspire me today. Thank you so much for your positive support.

Benjamin Bartley

July 3, 2024 at 12:32 PM

Congratulations on your POTD! Inspirational.

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 12:36 PM

Thanks Benjamin, I really appreciate that. Take care my friend.

Jim Slaughter

July 3, 2024 at 10:39 AM

And pretty pithy ones, at that. Congrats on POTD, Randy.

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 11:35 AM

Thanks Jim, it was a nice surprise to wake up to.

Beryl Edmonds

July 3, 2024 at 9:33 AM

Very good Randy, the poem reads both top to bottom, and bottom to top, I love it when that happens. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 11:39 AM

Thanks Beryl, I kind of feel like I just became prom king.

Paula Goldsmith

July 3, 2024 at 7:53 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed "Sailing on an ocean breeze." A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away......................

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 11:43 AM

Thank you Paula, it was a nice surprise. I'm fond of ocean breezes too, being that I'm a Navy veteran.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

July 3, 2024 at 7:20 AM

Congratulations on POTD, Randy! I felt like I was sailing on that open sea, and it made your words alight on my heart! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 11:45 AM

Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your kind support. It inspires me to continue writing.

Hilda Greenhough

July 3, 2024 at 5:46 AM

This is an enjoyable poem. Very positive congratulations on POTD.

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 11:47 AM

Hi Hilda, thank you for your positive feedback. It's greatly appreciated.

Steven Mwakatundu

July 3, 2024 at 5:40 AM

Congrats on POTD. Don't we all like to ponder into the vastness of our minds. Reflectional!

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 11:50 AM

Thanks Steven, I do most of my pondering between 4 and 6 am. before I go to bed. That's the curse of being a nocturnal critter.

Tania Kitchin

July 3, 2024 at 4:35 AM

Randy, nicely done, congratulations on POTD.

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 12:31 PM

Thanks Tania, it was a nice surprise. I appreciate your support.

Heidi Sands

July 3, 2024 at 3:57 AM

Very nice to read today! Congratulations for POTD :)

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 12:37 PM

Thanks Heidi, how nice of you to say. I really appreciate it.

Nancy Kaufman

July 3, 2024 at 3:43 AM

Hi Randy, Congratulations on this very nicely penned POTD. It has the vastness of the ocean with metaphors of keeping an open mind. I actually loved seeing this so early in the day. Blessings to you and enjoy your honor Randy..

Randy Freie

July 3, 2024 at 12:39 PM

Thanks Nancy, I really appreciate your support and kindness.