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Wow! What a great move! He fakes them out of their shoes! Fifty points tonight... Yeah, my son, 'the superstar' ~ Wish he'd treat his mother right

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Date: 12/5/2019 4:14:00 AM
The coaches do an amazing job of teaching most to be respectful and kind but....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2019 12:09:00 PM
Somehow the kid learned this kind of behavior in the home though. :) gw
Date: 12/4/2019 12:29:00 PM
Yeah, some kids need to learn manners at home. Great ending on your tanka, gershon
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Date: 12/4/2019 1:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Andrea! :) gw
Date: 12/4/2019 8:58:00 AM
Wow! Phew! I feel the emotion.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/4/2019 1:00:00 PM
Feelings run high when there 'a star' in the family. Thanks, Kim! :) gw
Date: 12/4/2019 5:40:00 AM
Our first obligation is at home but sometimes children lose their way to the neon signs of this world. Great poem dear Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/4/2019 12:58:00 PM
Thanks, Pixie. You are so right. Home isn't flashy,, but there's no place like it! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 12/3/2019 10:38:00 PM
Hi Gershon is your son in football? Thanks for sharing my friend
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/4/2019 12:57:00 PM
Ha, ha. None of my three sons played football. One played basketball, but the poem's not about him. He is nice to his mom! :) gw

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