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Pointless

Write a poem with a Point, was the challenge so I thought I'd give it a try I thought about it for quite a while but I couldn't and don't know why! I thought I'd express my Point of View whether folks liked it or not but then I had to ask myself "My Point of View about what?" I probably should try to get to the Point then that would make it O.K. unfortunately that doesn't make too much sense cause I just don't know what I would say. So what is the Point to keep trying it's useless at this Point in Time if I were to continue this silly charade I'll tell you Point Blank it's a crime. Allow me to finally get to the Point which is thankful, prudent and wise this whole composition is Pointless which, for certain, is not a surprise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2011 4:16:00 AM
Congrats Ralph on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:33:00 PM
great result ralph, pleased to read your work.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:26:00 PM
Hi Ralph - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:58:00 AM
Congrats Ralph on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry my friend... u sure made the point luv.. enjoy another chart topper with luv and a very happy weekend...
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the cointest, Ralph
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:24:00 AM
Hi Robert! Congratulations on your win in Paula's "What's the Point?" Contest! Totally enjoyed! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Ralph in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:40:00 AM
Smiles, great use of the given prompt - I like to take writing this direction myself from time to time... This takes you quickly through drawing your eye to the end to see where exactly it is going. Great use of rhme in this form. Well done and good luck for the contest, I think you make your point perfectly! Thanks for coming by today to comment also, appreciated! Anna-Marie.
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Date: 1/15/2011 8:09:00 AM
Another sweet write from your pen,Ralph.Thank you for congratulating me.You also deserve the same
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Date: 1/12/2011 4:35:00 AM
Very very unusual write creating your own theme for the poem, Good luck in the contest, Ralph
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Date: 1/11/2011 11:29:00 PM
This is very informative Ralph, which is a point i guess, enjoyed this very intelligent poem. Harry
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:03:00 PM
Very cool and interesting write Ralph.. good luck in the contest my friend and a nice piece of poetry to share with us tonight on the point of it all..luv..
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Date: 1/11/2011 6:10:00 PM
You managed to make your point to me. This looks like a viable entry to the contest. Good luck with it.
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