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Pointless

with bullseye moving and my arrow quivering could this be pointless? 2/21/2023 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/24/2023 6:59:00 AM
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Ha! Cleverly written Kim! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Jcb Brul
Date: 2/24/2023 5:06:00 AM
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Nice take dear Kim! Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2023 5:31:00 AM
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Thank you, JCB!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/24/2023 1:08:00 AM
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Very evocative of whether to proceed with all things with uncertainty, trepidation and shifting goals. Demonstrating perfectly that the thoughts at the point of aim, don't necessarily dictate the outcome. Excellent poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2023 5:31:00 AM
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2023 11:23:00 AM
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Could be. Reads like a good contender to me for Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 1:25:00 PM
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Thanks, Sara!
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 2/22/2023 3:27:00 AM
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Excellent, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 5:24:00 AM
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Thank you, Jo!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/21/2023 11:08:00 PM
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Loved this poem. Very intelligent.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 5:24:00 AM
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Thanks so much! I appreciate you, dear friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/21/2023 10:14:00 PM
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Ha, ha! Very clever, Kim! You've certainly made a great point! Smiles forever, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 5:24:00 AM
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Thank you, Gershon…when I get a guffaw from you, I know I’ve done ok… smiles back at ya!
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Julie Draper
Date: 2/21/2023 8:50:00 PM
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I really enjoyed this questionku, it's terrific! Paints a picture succinctly :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 5:23:00 AM
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Thanks, Julie!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/21/2023 7:15:00 PM
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I really like this one! Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 7:29:00 PM
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Thank you, Pangie! <3

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