Pointless

with bullseye moving and my arrow quivering could this be pointless? 2/21/2023 Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Fowler Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Ha! Cleverly written Kim! Congratulations on your win! :)
Brul Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Nice take dear Kim! Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Could be. Reads like a good contender to me for Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Daniel Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Excellent, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 11:08 PM
Loved this poem. Very intelligent.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Thanks so much! I appreciate you, dear friend!
Wolf Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 10:14 PM
Ha, ha! Very clever, Kim! You've certainly made a great point! Smiles forever, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Thank you, Gershon…when I get a guffaw from you, I know I’ve done ok… smiles back at ya!
Draper Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 8:50 PM
I really enjoyed this questionku, it's terrific! Paints a picture succinctly :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Thanks, Julie!
Romios Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:15 PM
I really like this one! Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, Pangie! <3
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