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Pointing Fingers

Sitting by the window of a moving train.. Feeling alone She ponders.. As to why it must be.. Pointing fingers.. How can one know another.. He explodes in a massive fury.. Insinuating negativity.. Demands.. Insults.. Behaving as the judge and jury.. Judgmental accusations.. Harsh poisonous words.. Pointing fingers.. She had become an open wound.. Hurting immensely.. She had become a target.. A bullseye caused by his delusions of her character.. She stares deeply out the window.. Train moving rapidly.. Beautiful scenic views of landscapes.. On a warm spring day.. took her breath away.. Splendid visions.. Pointing fingers.. She feels alone Pain.. Misjudged by another.. A victim of his delusions.. All.. While embracing magnificent scenic views .. A stunning picture perfect scenery.. She melts into the moment.. She delves into the magnificence.. Captivated.. Becoming.. Being.. Suddenly .. Only that moment in time existed.. There was nothing else.. Pointing fingers had vanished.. Melted away.. No longer existed.. Now she sits by the window of a moving train.. A warm lovely smile.. Glowing beautifully.. Natural beauty does indeed dominate..

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/31/2018 12:08:00 PM

Hi Robertina, such wonderful, emotional writing from your golden pen. This is indeed a wonderful write. has to be a fave. I love the content of this piece. Such strong images your poem does portray upon the canvas. I am glad she stayed upon the train and ended with a lighter heart. The ending was just excellent. Hope. always hope. Have a wonderful New Year Robertina. Hugs....Mike. XX

Robertina B.
Date: 12/31/2018 1:20:00 PM

So happy its a fave!! Thank you for your amazing words and support, my friend.. May your New Year be filled with peace and joy!!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/27/2018 6:13:00 AM

That little pointed finger does more harm then anyone realizes. Glad she stayed steady and true on the train, Lovely words penned Robertina. I hope you had a good Christmas, Love xo

Robertina B.
Date: 12/31/2018 1:17:00 PM

Season's Greetings !! Thank you for your lovely words and visit.. A Healthy and Wonderful New Year, my friend!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/23/2018 5:43:00 PM

From 'fingers-pointed' to 'finger-painted!' Joy and Blessings, my friend! ~ Gershon (soupmail)

Robertina B.
Date: 12/31/2018 1:16:00 PM

Same to you Dear friend.. As always Thank you!! Have a Wonderful New Year!! Filled with Joy and peace..

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/22/2018 3:39:00 PM

From the negative to the positive, in this beautiful poem,,love it..

Robertina B.
Date: 12/31/2018 1:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and visit, Harry.. Have a Wonderful New Year, my friend!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/21/2018 12:01:00 AM

Dear Robertina, I adore how your poem moves and evolves thoughtfully from a woeful mood to one of melting mindfully into the moment to find a blissful contentment. Such beautifully expressive and compelling poetry, my dear friend. A fav! Warmest wishes for a joyous holiday season.. ~Susan

Robertina B.
Date: 12/21/2018 11:36:00 AM

My Dear friend, Susan.. Your support is so wonderful.. I thank you kindly!! So happy its a fav!! May you and your family have a Marvellous Holiday!! A blessed holiday season and New Year..

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/20/2018 5:27:00 PM

Excellent poem!!! The beauty of this creation dominated! :) Love it. :)

Robertina B.
Date: 12/20/2018 5:35:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful words and visit, my friend.. Really appreciate it! Blessings..