Pointed Ponderings

Day in, and day out, from the ripe old age of five,
I’ve take to sharp objects and whittled at their sides.

Lancing pristine white paper with brazen blue veins,
it was quite impossible for me to abstain.

Day in, and day out, from the egg to the cane,
with old age beaconing and more of the same.

Lancings lingering images on pages of fading memories...
perhaps they're dreams these blue traceries,

As impossible as it seems, impossible, and often strained? 
I wonder would it have been best for me to simply have abstained?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#185" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 2:08 AM
Debbie, congrats on your win, tea and whittling sounds good to me..David
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 2:05 PM
This one is cryptic for me but I sure like the sound of it. Congrats on your win, my friend.
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win ! LORI
Gangabissoon Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Congrats with this great write! :)
A   Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 3:39 PM
DG., love the reachable thought... congratulations with your awesome win, in Brian's contest..xox~PD
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Debbie I am really enjoying this one xx
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:22 AM
introspective musings, debbie... congrats on your worthy win!..:) huggs!
Grisetti Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest.
O'Leary Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 4:24 AM
Beautiful poem... worthy of your win! Terry
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March 4, 2012 at 6:47 AM
Be proud of yourself Debbie, well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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