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Written on May 31st, 2025 for Kai Michael Neumann's Point of No Return Poetry Contest
A crescent moon dangles in the distance, whilst meteors jet across Prussian blue heavens, leaving trails of grey ash in their wake. An abnormal, elongated silence creeps through threadbare trees, as an imperceptible breeze skims past my hair, causing, for just a second, déjà vu— a flutter between my muffled heart and a crushing ribcage jolts me back. Never-ending, frayed nerves keep me on edge; the taste of insufferable copper taints my tongue. Spitting it out—only for it to return, haunting me like your last words, replicating, repeating nightmares, eating into my wailing brain. That night: the broken glass, shattered mirrors, overturned tables, blood-sheathed floors— became our point of no return.

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