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In my last poem  we were in a classroom setting. Now in a social situation. 

I just caught a glimpse of you walking on past I then caught a glimpse of you glimpsing me But you didn’t see me glimpsing you too My gosh you are one fine young woman You stirred up the feelings I haven’t felt like this in a while But it made me smile Unrequited love is a lonely place But I just think of your face And what a beautiful face it is A face that I chase in my mind Please forgive me as I think of our marriage bed All kinds of desires fill my head But only desires and fires for you Save all my love? Only for you Two hearts become one and then flourish as two And we nourish the flower Give it tender care Give all the things it needs to flourish anywhere Oh! young and inexperienced woman Why do you keep walking by I think you are trying to catch my eye Well, it’s caught and now what do I do? I must say I have the most awesome view And this view of you I keep with me And maybe it’s a little playful teasing on your part But my sexy and foxy poser This voyeur’s camera is ready for the shot So, keep walking by (Can I be so bold to say my future bride) And we will exchange glances and glimpses (Hoping one day we will) Consummate our internal playfulness inside

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