Poets Plight

empty page brain cage out of phrase

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Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 12:41:00 PM

Debbie, my mind's out for the summer. JK. Enjoyed. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2010 1:52:00 PM

DEb, this is the one I have chosen to "redo" WATCH out. hahaha. Actually, I love this little one. And it shows only too well how little we have to say when our muse is gone from us. But some people like me, we never shut up and do a succinct little poem even when this happens to us. No , we have other ways to approach it. so I am gonna post mine now. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2010 5:26:00 AM

Love this one...Sometimes we need that little spark...That puts the romance back in our empty page..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem "As The Mist That Rides The Waves"...It is about my love for God...Thanks..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/17/2010 7:53:00 AM

Is this for Brian's contest? the Footle..its great but I thought only two lines?? SOUP MAIL on your new contest..luv..

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 6/17/2010 5:41:00 AM

sounds familiar. I'm definitely getting fed up with rhyming poems. it's like in order for the phrases to rhyme you have to sacrifice a lot of what you're trying to say sometimes. but then without the rhyme it sounds less like a poem and more like a diary entry or something. At least for me it does. Take cae Deb.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/15/2010 10:52:00 PM

Been there...Nice write. Smiles, Dane Ann

Rick Parise

Date: 6/15/2010 5:55:00 PM

thanks anyway