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Poets Dozen-Dance of Light

Dance of Light heavens brighten stars eyes I gaze into unlocks shackles of my soul Drowning passion of our burning fire Illuminating glow of my desire We've shared an inordinate amount of happiness, and desires Poetic romance has always sparked what has keep our love alive Alone encased in darkness of payne’s grey shadows Blind brush fingers trace the shadow of your strong face Fragile substance of my soul is warp with sorrows Left with the rhythm of your heartbeat life in grace Between your breasts nestle whispers and wet tears lace 11/4/2015
One modern Haiku: 3 lines: Syllables 5,7,5 A couplet: 2 lines Free verse: 2 lines English Quintain: 5 lines: Rhyming scheme ababb Contest: A Poet’s Dozen Poetry Contest Sponsored By: Silent One
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Canerdy Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve. Janice
Merryman Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Eve, congrats on your wonderful win with this passionate and romantic poem! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:26 PM
Such a lovely and romantic poem, Eve. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Nunez Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 10:55 PM
A warm, affirming romantic write, Eve. Congrats! hugs!
Dutta Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 9:18 PM
So poetic n romantic expression. I love your poems. Congrats on your win Hugs Anisha
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 10:19 PM
Thank you, Anisha, so very much for the compliment and the congratulations Hugs Eve
Lindley Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Congrats on your great win with this fine poem my friend. Love those verses!!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 10:18 PM
Robert, thank you so very much for the compliment and the congratulations, I am glad you liked it. Hugs Eve
Cheema Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Very warm! Congrats Eve!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 10:17 PM
Thank you so very much, Balveen, for the compliment and the congratulations Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Enjoyed reading you work..There is a great poetic quaity to the lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Mutindi Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 1:34 AM
Hi Eve, good luck in the contest!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, Grace, for your support. Hugs Eve
A. Sharma Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 1:19 AM
Ah this is so so amazingly beautiful Eve and such smoothly flowing .. Gl in contest!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma for your wonderful compliment and your great support. Hugs Eve
Godwin Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:47 PM
Very beautiful, Eve - I enjoyed your poem very much ... CayCay
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, CayCay, for your compliment and your great support. Hugs Eve
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