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Poet's Dozen

young man new in town all of the girls on alert amazed he chose me Some of them were wittier. A few of them were prettier. He asked to take me to the movies. I blushed as I said yes. "Gone With The Wind" was showing. and Clark Gable was the star My date had no way of knowing I thought him handsomer by far, until I told him in the car. 1/06/2016

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Date: 1/16/2016 7:22:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 1/9/2016 7:43:00 PM
Very sweet, Joyce, and you were the most beautiful to him for sure! Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/9/2016 6:32:00 PM
awww, that's a very sweet ending, Joyce. You must be special for him to have chosen you. Well done!
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:08:00 PM
Congrats on your placement Joyce :)-*smiles*
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:39:00 PM
Joyce, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Joyce, love your first date imagery.
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Date: 1/9/2016 12:22:00 PM
Cute write Joyce! You still have that touch I love so much...I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 1/8/2016 4:38:00 AM
Joyce, a bit of humor, spice and romance such a wonderful entry you wrote.. =`)~OLive Eloisa =`)
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