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10/30/2024

 

Image by Mark Toney using DALL-E (2024-10-25)

 

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Rhyme (first stanza) — Eight arms, three hearts, blue blood, nine brains, and special ink. If that doesn’t describe a poet I don’t know what does! ;-)

Monorhyme  (Oh Octopi) — Octopuses have eight limbs, of which six are used as “arms,” so I’ve written the Oh Octopi portion with six-line stanzas of eight-syllable lines. Method to my madness? You betcha!

 

Notes: 

Linguistically speaking, I acknowledge that the preferred plural of octopus when speaking and writing in English is octopuses. I chose to use octopi since it works better with my monorhyme. Octopi ocassionally appears in published works, but it's seldom used. Mirriam-Webster says, "The -i ending comes from the belief that words of Latin origin should have Latin endings in English (while octopus may ultimately come from Greek it had a stay in New Latin before arriving here) ..."

 

 

You may consider it extremely odd I’m so easily influenced by a cephalopod Eight arms, three hearts, blue blood, nine brains All unique, yet something else remains The most important fact on which to think? Cephalopods, like poets, possess special ink Oh Octopi Oh Octopi up in the sky I wonder why you are so high Don’t mean to pry but please reply I have to try to reason why Why are you shy? Why can you fly? Please tell me why and do not lie We're Octopi. On us you spy? Imply we're shy? Imply we lie? Don't wonder why we’re in the sky Do not defy and do not pry Do not decry — That’s our reply Quickly comply! We do not lie Oh my, oh my, I'll never pry I'll not decry nor you defy I will comply, on me rely Oh, Octopi up in the sky You do not lie! So high you fly! To you I bid adieu — Bye-bye!

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Date: 11/9/2024 1:14:00 PM
Wow! Octopi are pretty impressive creatures! I'm thinking of the possibilities with all those brains and hearts and arms.
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Date: 11/9/2024 1:47:00 PM
I know, right?! I have enough to keep me busy with only one brain. :)

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