Nkoyo Nsa Poet Blank verse

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What is wrong with you
Why will login take ages
Do you love me
           Or
Did sleep take you away!

No way

You never sleep nor slumber
Mighty life here
I could feel every friends pain and glory
Touch their hands of fears
And you grow slow
Please wake up 
Fix this

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Ronald D Thompson February 12, 2022 at 12:59 PM Straight to the point!! Nice work Nkoyo, love your style. Best wishes..Ron :) Nkoyo Nsa April 2, 2022 at 1:20 AM Thanks best wishes Ron

Bill Baker February 4, 2022 at 5:11 PM Way to go, Nkoyo. Tell it like it is. Brought a smile to my face, but still serious. Have a great week! Bill Nkoyo Nsa February 7, 2022 at 6:03 AM Thanks Bill

Komal Walimbe January 27, 2022 at 8:29 AM I really liked the way you put your problems into a poem. It sure is humorous! A great one! Nkoyo Nsa February 4, 2022 at 11:25 AM Thank you Komal