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What is wrong with you Why will login take ages Do you love me Or Did sleep take you away! No way You never sleep nor slumber Mighty life here I could feel every friends pain and glory Touch their hands of fears And you grow slow Please wake up Fix this

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Date: 2/12/2022 12:59:00 PM
Straight to the point!! Nice work Nkoyo, love your style. Best wishes..Ron :)
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Nkoyo Nsa
Date: 4/2/2022 1:20:00 AM
Thanks best wishes Ron
Date: 2/4/2022 5:11:00 PM
Way to go, Nkoyo. Tell it like it is. Brought a smile to my face, but still serious. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 2/7/2022 6:03:00 AM
Thanks Bill
Date: 1/27/2022 8:29:00 AM
I really liked the way you put your problems into a poem. It sure is humorous! A great one!
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Date: 2/4/2022 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Komal

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